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5/13/2011 4:40 PM (GMT-04:00)
AmyleeStrange

Let's write a story together....

...by just adding one sentence below.


Once upon a long time ago there was a girl that lived in a big house. ...

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5/13/2011 5:47 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGigaCure

Re: Let's write a story together....

and she sensed she was not alone...


5/13/2011 7:16 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

Re: Let's write a story together....

She would often be quietly reading on the sofa in the living room, and hear the floor boards creaking in the back room.


5/13/2011 7:44 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankleahcl

Re: Let's write a story together....

But one night was different


5/13/2011 7:49 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankMetassa

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the gentle sounds of the house settling and creaking in the background were drowned out by...


5/14/2011 3:55 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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a blood-curdling SCREAM from the garden!


5/15/2011 12:36 AM (GMT-04:00)
User RankMetassa

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The curious thing about that was that she didn't have a garden. Where was she? Had she woken up somewhere else? What's this?!! Why, it's completely new!


5/15/2011 2:07 AM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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And then she woke up!


5/15/2011 8:17 AM (GMT-04:00)
User RankAmyleeStrange

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and found herself in a completely different time and place...


5/15/2011 9:01 AM (GMT-04:00)
User RankMelaniePhoebex

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She looked around and found nothing was as it seemed; mushrooms couldn't be that big and roses couldn't smile, let alone have eyes and a nose as well...


5/15/2011 1:18 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

Re: Let's write a story together....

A talking rose shouted grumpily "You don't come from around here. Who are you?"


5/15/2011 2:01 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGigaCure

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just me..she said.


5/15/2011 3:47 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankjnette

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"Where am I?", she asked, as more flowers; as well as insects as big as she, came for a closer look.


5/15/2011 3:59 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

Re: Let's write a story together....

The Rose said "We don't discuss particulars with strangers. Who are you?"


5/15/2011 5:10 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGigaCure

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Questions..questions,,answers isz wot i want,,^..^""
And she sink away into the strange mood she has been in for ages....


5/16/2011 12:48 AM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

Re: Let's write a story together....

As the girl's mood fell she, herself, fell...deeper and deeper...until she landed in The Flux!


5/18/2011 4:36 AM (GMT-04:00)
User RankToonLeonC14

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She found herself floating in the flux with Nigel,


5/18/2011 3:14 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankTheIceCreamLament

Re: Let's write a story together....

Some guy who looked like a bad supply teacher (he was mostly bald, dressed in brown and with oversized, grey glasses) appeared and threw a book at her, before shouting out 'Read that!' and then covering his nose in tissue paper and waddling off into a wardrobe filled with fur coats.


5/18/2011 4:38 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

Re: Let's write a story together....

The girl opened the book and the first words on the first page were "THE RULES AND REGULATIONS OF MAINTAINING YOURSELF WHILST RESIDING IN THE FLUX by Reginald Dingwall Eyewinker".


5/18/2011 6:22 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankjnette

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The introduction was written in Furthark Runes. Luckily, she just learned all about them while visiting her grandmother in Ireland. Her grandmother--known by all as Gram Oralia--lives in a cave which was handed down to her throughout generations, and had many ancient writings on the wall, from Runes, to the translations into modern English.
Upon deciphering the Runes, she understood the introduction meant, "Beware, all whose eyes look upon these pages".

She wasn't one to be scared, though. She simply remembered a few protective spells Gram Orlalia taught her, and remembered that this may be what her Gram calls "bilocation"--and not any sort of dream at all. In fact, she may even have Astrally projected into another realm without realizing it!!!


5/18/2011 9:49 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankleahcl

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Curiously, the first rule was 'You must be dressed in the colour Fuschia at all times'. She looked down at her tight black dress in dismay. 'Fuschia?' 'Why?' 'For The Flux?' As she pondered, her dress began to swirl and change colour.


5/18/2011 10:26 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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While aflutter due to the sudden color change, the girl read the second rule: "Make sure you continue to blink." That seemed like it would come naturally until a cloud of gray flux fumes wafted past her face, forcing her to shut her eyes against the stinging tears that forced their way through the seams of her clenching eyelids. "Blink!" she thought, but she could not.


5/18/2011 10:36 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankleahcl

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She heard music in the distance as the mascara ran down her face. She reached for a pair of sunglasses that appeared in front of her and put them on. The stinging stopped; so did the music.


5/18/2011 11:10 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankasinglenote

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she felt peculiarly empty; like something had been removed from her head that she never really acknowledged, but somehow knew was there. she missed the music terribly


5/18/2011 11:30 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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The girl reopened the book to read the third rule: "Listen closely and you shall hear." The girl focused on the music that she had heard, until she could clearly hear it again. The music became louder and louder until it was so piercing, the girl covered her ears. She shouted out "What is the fourth rule? I need to know!" A booming voice, louder than the loudest music roared "The fourth rule is keep a low profile." "Oh, dear." the girl thought, as she squatted lower, and lower to the ground, until she was kneeling and the music was at the perfect level...loud, but not in the least bit distorted and painful. She scooted forward on her knees until she could grab hold of the book that she had dropped when she rushed to cover her ears. She read the fifth rule, which was "Sit patiently and wait for something wonderful to come to you." So she made herself comfortable, and sat. Waiting for the something wonderful to come to her.


5/18/2011 11:33 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankasinglenote

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soon, she lost feeling in her kness and they got prickly and tingly, and, forgetting the rules in her pain, stood suddenly. she had a terrible head rush, and then something incredibly strangely wonderful happened


5/19/2011 4:22 AM (GMT-04:00)
User RankToonLeonC14

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In an instant without thought or presence of mind, she outstretched both arms to each side and soared off up high into the pink sky, cutting through the turquiose clouds, swooping along side the four winged bright yellow Clarty Birds. As she looked down towards the purple land mass surrounded by the brightest orange sea...


5/19/2011 6:10 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankjnette

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While soaring over the bright orange sea, she could clearly see some sort of civilization at the bottom of it; almost as if it wasn't a sea at all, but more a gateway to another reality. Strangley enough, she still had to force herself to blink; as if it was an outrageoous chore.


5/19/2011 10:27 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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"I'm still in The Flux"a the girl thought as she soared across the sky "My eyes are still burning. It's still difficult for me to blink."


5/20/2011 4:16 AM (GMT-04:00)
User RankToonLeonC14

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As a Blow Fly hit her open eye adhering as it did. It dawned on her that her eyes were now in the ends of her big toes peeping through the ends of her Jesus Sandals.
She thought this is a very strange turn of event yet she felt at complete peace and as calm as she had ever been, when something very ordinary happened...


5/20/2011 12:19 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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She farted! When she did, her own acrid fumes from her mingled with the acidic fumes from The Flux and then bada-bing, bada-BOOM...there was an explosion! The girl was propelled through the air like a rocket...her face distorting...pressing and spreading...until THUMP! She landed on her belly upon salty, wet sand.


5/20/2011 12:46 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGlimmer

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No sooner had she landed, she found herself looking into the face of a giant fish & was quickly eaten up and found herself in darkness...


5/20/2011 2:08 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankTheIceCreamLament

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She spluttered and looked up, still blinking, to see a light in the distance. Her eyes were back in their normal place and she felt dizzy. As she stumbled towards the light, she heard the voice of the bald man with the glasses, shouting about something or other, and presently she found him holding the book he had thrown at her and claiming that he could do much better. He still had the tissue paper attached to his nose and his little moustache was twitching as he spoke.

The girl tried to back away, but she knocked his light over as she stepped, and both of their shadows were flung upwards. There was silence for a moment, and then, the strange man shouted out in his strained Cockney accent
'I've got a fan! Someone actually likes me! Which is your favourite neville?'
'Neville?'
'Yes.'
'Do you mean novel?'
'No!' Came the reply, as loud and piercing as possible, 'I am a nevillist!'
'Oh, I haven't read any...'
'Oh' he squealed, and he went away and sat down and started to cry.
'Oh don't cry,' she said, 'what's your name?'
'Neville Novel' he said, sounding almost proud.
The girl looked at him and now that she had seen his face close up she was quite shocked by how ugly he was, and she ran away. Where to, she did not know, but she had to get away from that strange freak of nature...


5/20/2011 4:13 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGlimmer

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Giant Fish, who had quite the case of heart burn, was very pissed off that the girl had managed to escape through its blowhole, as The Fish had carefully chosen her to be Neville's bride...mermaids galore, but Neville wanted a Real Girl.


5/22/2011 7:32 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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"I thought you were a REAL girl!" the beached fish called out to her as she ran off in front of him.

She stopped, turned and called back to it, "Of course I am a real girl. What other kind of girl could I possibly be?"

The fish called out "You are not real! You are man-made. Man-made girls and boys are incompatible with Flux Youeighting individuals. Like myself. Like Neville."

"Youeighting! I don't care what you are!"

"Man-made as you are, you would not understand that we Youeighting people of Flux are eternal. You would not understand. Your little man-made mind is incapable of understanding our ways. Flux is...well, it is special. We have no room here for such of those as yourself. Go back to where you came from. You are not good enough to marry my dear Neville."

"I am NOT marrying anyone under your conditions." the girl cried out, then ran off as fast as her feet would carry her along a path leading away from the fish on the beach. She cried hot tears "How can I go back to where I came from? I don't know how to get back to there! I want to go home. I WANT TO GO HOME. Oh, I wish I still had hold of that silly book."


5/23/2011 1:28 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankasinglenote

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the fish sat in the small waves on the sand and cried himself to sleep, which is wen he found himself drowning. ironically enough.

the girl heard his weeping, and dd not turn to comfort the4 fish. she found herself running towards a huge glowing city, a spiderweb of sticky temptation where a giant spider lived. The builldings were all strngely colored, orange and purple and blue and red. they swayed oddly in the wind


5/24/2011 10:47 AM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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the girl heard his weeping, and dd not turn to comfort the4 fish. she found herself running towards a huge glowing city, a spiderweb of sticky temptation where a giant spider lived. The builldings were all strngely colored, orange and purple and blue and red. they swayed oddly in the wind


A thought went through her mind to beware the spiderweb that glistened overehead, when a sudden explosion in the distance was followed by a shower of falling ash that covered the sticky web, allowing the girl to run beneath it. When she exited on the opposite side of the colorful city, she could see what looked like a candy-striped legged Spiderman, frantically trying to rescue his obviously ruined web.

From afar, the girl could see a radiant pink light that enticed to to investigate. As she walked towards it, it became pinker and pinker until the entire area appeared rosy. "It's like looking at a city through rose-colored glasses." she thought "Without the glasses!"


5/25/2011 5:25 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankTheIceCreamLament

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She drifted towards the light, enticed by the mysterious shape, but she found herself stopped by something that she thought to be a lamppost, but which turned out to be the leg of the spiderman, who was humming a lullaby to himself as he fixed his web. The girl looked up at him, but he had not felt her walking into him, so she kept going. The light grew more and more vast, until she could see nothing else. Eventually, when it had completely surrounded her, it began to fade. What she saw sent shivers down her spine. Never before had she seen something so hideously grotesque. It was far worse than Neville. It was disgusting.


6/16/2011 2:17 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankedgegotmoved3

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She would have winced at the sight if she could have. For some odd reason she found herself humming the spider's catchy tune silently to herself, gathering strength. This tune, this wee friendly melody inside her, was the only thing that kept her from absolutely going mad at what stood before her. Radiating pink hues in front of her was a huge slimy mass of glowing wormslugs, with fairly large round mouths holding needle-like teeth all round; complete this with black, tar-like saliva oozing out of the spaces between the sharp points so that when the mouths started laughing and harrumping on the floor, the spit just sounded absolutely sick. Kinda like a bunch of Jabba the Huts with teeth!


6/16/2011 3:26 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGigaCure

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Space was outthere...or was it in her?


6/16/2011 6:25 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankTimeIsGallant

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Perhaps it (space) wasnt just in her..She looked past the horrific and disgustingly beautiful black slimey mouths of those many wormslugs and saw a path behind them. The pile of wormslugs was far too large to see what the path led to.. she started going towards the path thinking to herself that she would never drink absinthe again.


6/17/2011 10:25 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankGlimmer

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"..... she started going towards the path thinking to herself that she would never drink absinthe again.{/q}

She changed her mind pretty damn quickly regarding the absinthe.

She knew where she wanted to go, and it was past Wormwood...um, Valley.


Absinthe was her ticket to rock.


6/25/2011 11:10 AM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankedgegotmoved3

Re: Let's write a story together....

Or so she thought. She knew the potential for fun was there, but the last time she indulged she got into a fight, certainly not winning any points for herself. How can I get the cavalier attitude without the bitch? She wondered aloud along with real revulsion over the slurping sounds!!! Seriously! The spider-man's tune was a newish one to her, and she didn't know all the words yet...BUT appropriately enough, No Doubt's Spiderweb was screaming at her (like it came from the spider)
and she felt very stupid and exposed all of a sudden!


6/29/2011 11:07 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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Suddenly (because all of the MOST strangest things occur quite suddenly) a loud, screeching sound wrapped around the girl like a shivering cold that penetrated until her rib cage ached from the shrill velocity of it. Then the thumping whoosh. Thump whoosh. Thump whoosh. Shrieking. Thumping whooshing until the talons of a gigantic purple bird closed over both shoulders...and she was swooped up, up, up...over trees, over mountains, up towards the blinding hot red sun that burned hotter the closer the bird carried her.


6/30/2011 12:06 AM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankasinglenote

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and she thought idly (as all thoughts during deathly situation occur as, idle) that this bird is much too purple. this sun is unnaturally hot.

'i must fly on my own!' she cried. 'i realize now, let me go, let me go!' she scratched at the bird's talons around her waist. and the talons started melting closer to the sun, the entire body of the purple bird melted like butter in a microwave oven.


6/30/2011 2:14 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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And the girl fell unstoppably fast towards an unrecognizable Earth. Gone was the swirling whites in the luscious blues. All that was blue was now purple!

The girl tried to scream but pressure of speeding through space like a comet was too great and she could not open her mouth.

Suddenly (again, because all of the MOST strangest things occur quite suddenly) she was snatched up into the arms of a flying woman, who brought her to the purple Earth and safely set her feet upon the solid ground.

The girl was overjoyed with gratitude "Thank you. Thank you ever so much. I fully expected that I would die."

"You wouldn't have died, but you would have gone into orbit with the rest of the planets, asteroids, comets and space debris that travel about in space these days. Right now, I can clearly see that your problem is that you are in the wrong dimension! You are not of THIS world. Not at all. This is a magical world and there are few who are actually residing in it. You need to be born of it to be here, too, as well."

"What do you mean by 'too'? Are you somewhere else....too?"

"Of course I am. I am here and I am there. Many are, but in comparison there are very few."

"How do I leave here to get to where you say I must be?"

"I'll fly you there, but first I need to replenish my fluids with purple grape juice. You should have a tall glass too. For energy, you see."

The woman reached her bare hand into the air and when she pulled it back to herself, there was a purple glass in it. "It's only grape juice. It won't hurt you. Even if you are a diabetic. Are you a diabetic?"

"No."

"Well, on the Blue Earth, I am." the woman said, as she pulled another purple glass of juice for herself.

"It's delicious." the girl said "The best grape juice I ever tasted."

"It's real juice, that's why. None of that pretend artificially flavored stuff that makes your tongue purple but does nothing to imbibe energy. Drink up. We can go as soon as you chug your juice down." the woman said before tipping her own glass and and drinking the juice down to the last drop. "Ah, that is just the pick me up I needed. Are you up for a fantastic flight of fancy?"

"Uh, yes. " the girl said, drinking down her last drop of juice. "I want to go home."

"Then hold my hand, I'll take you there." the woman said.

"Who are you?" the girl said "I'd like to know before we fly off into outer space together."

"You have no other choice. You either fly off with me, or you stay her and purplize. The only way back to the Blue Earth is to fly there. Can you fly?"

"No."

"Well, I can." the woman say "Are you ready or not?"

"I'm ready. But who are you?"

"I am Suzanne."

"Suzanne who?"

"Suzanne from The Imaginary 8 The Girl's One Woman Purples Band. On the Blue Earth my band is blue. Here, it is purple. I need to get back too. I have lots of things to get done that I've put off to come here and play."

"You played a concert here?"

"No! It's an imaginary band! I came here to play. I was bored. It was something to do. Let's go!"

With that, the woman, Suzanne, took hold of the girl's small hand and up, up, up they went in the the colorless Yonder, aiming towards the Blue Earth which was as yet, nowhere to be seen.

"I can't see the Blue Earth." the girl cried.

"You need to close your eyes to see it."


6/30/2011 2:38 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankTheIceCreamLament

Re: Let's write a story together....

It was at this point that she realised, with absolute terror, that the sky she was flying in was in fact water, and the water ocean and land she had been swimming over was sky. The sun she had seen was in fact an illuminated buoy (there was a candle inside it). Gravity took hold of her, and she fell almost three thousand feet to the rocks below. The moment her body slammed against the hard stone, everything went black, and after what could have been an hour, a minute or a day, swirling colours appeared around her, flashing threateningtly and always changing. She stood alone in this strange place.


7/1/2011 10:19 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankti8tgowbb

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"But, the Lady said I would get back to the Blue Earth." she cried

And a woman's voice boomed, "Hey Girl, you ARE there on the Blue Earth. I didn't know where you lived. You will have to find your own way back home from where you are. I did the best that I can do with what I had to do it with. Make wishes. Click your heels together three times. Follow the yellow brick road. Better yet, use the stars to guide you home. Follow road signs. And if you see anyone along the way...beware. Not everybody is nice."

"Where are you? I can't see you."

"I'm just a figment of your imagination now. Take care. Be good. Stay safe. Peace."

"What?"

But there was only silence to answer her.


7/2/2011 2:10 PM (GMT-04:00)
User RankTheIceCreamLament

Re: Let's write a story together....

At this moment, she heard a faint tapping sound, and upon looking at the ground, noticed a small ferret near her left foot, drinking a bottle of whiskey and trying on different hats, which grew ever larger and more ridiculous.


7/6/2011 12:47 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankfrostedwheats

Re: Let's write a story together....

TheIceCreamLament--your message before last, the one that says the sky became solid water and the land below her being sky, the rocks um...she must have fallen sideways...it makes me think of the rhyme
"One fine day in the middle of the night
Two dead men got up to fight
Back to back they faced each other
Drew up swords and shot each other!" I haven't thought of that in Years and years! Thanks! : D


7/6/2011 12:56 PM (GMT-04:00)
User Rankfrostedwheats

Re: Let's write a story together....

So she hoped good things for her imaginary friend would come true in real life--love, happiness, and success. : ) The ferret's name was Nigel, the same guy who she saw swimming in the flux. "Hey, gimme a swig! Someone I actually liked just said goodbye to me...and I hope its not for keeps!" Wearing a gigantic black top hat at this point, the ferret willingly obliges.


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